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Post by kokobear on Jan 18, 2012 22:34:01 GMT -6
PG.1 prologue: Kur has no memory of her past, she is 10 yrs old. Alongside her is Koda, age 15 who's dark secrets elude even him. Both washed up at Samenheim's shore barely alive. "Oh god this girls bleeding" shouted the woman, she took Kurs hand. "sweetie, can you hear my voice?" kur raised her head and mumbled something then fell back to the sand and blacked out. Koda sat up and shook his head , he couldn't remember how he got there he tried and images began to flood into his head" UGH" he fell to the floor and blacked out " HELP HELP" shouted the woman. She left to go find help, when she was gone a man in a cloak came over to the children and smiled , he leaned down and picked both the kids up and whisked them away leaving the hysterical woman running around looking for help. Koda looks around and finds himself in a round room, it was spinning. He began to get a headache and grabbed his head. He looks over at Kur and a image of her flashes in his head and his hand began to go towards her neck, he swallowed nervously and tried to draw back his hand but his instinct was to kill. Before he could reach her, the door opened and a man in white walked in and kodas arm just fell to his side . The man just smiled at him and went back into the hall to return with a cart full of medical equipment.
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Post by Rin on Jan 18, 2012 22:43:32 GMT -6
I think your story has potential. You should think about it some more and develop it - perhaps it could become an OC for you to play? You have some good imagery, and I think it will help while role-playing. Thank you for posting in the Discussion Board!
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