Jaken [D]

[Kikyo / Jaken]

General Info

Full Name: Jaken
Title: None
Age: Unknown
Species: Kappa Demon
Class: Servant
Gender: Male

Appearance

Skin: Green
Hair: None
Eyes: Yellow
Height: 2"
Weight: 50 lb
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In-Depth Demon Appearance: Jaken is a small demon with green skin and yellow eyes. His eyes are large and too big for his head. He has a beak instead of a nose and mouth. Jaken has webbed feet and webbed hands to help him swim.

Although Jaken is small he is strong. He has strong arms from holding his Staff of Two Heads and strong legs to support his weight. Jaken does not wear shoes.

Equipment

Mount: A-Un
Inventory: None

Armour/Garments/Jewelery: Brown Hakama: a light-brown Hakama.

Brown Shirt: a dark brown shirt worn over a white under-shirt. It is long but reveals his hakama.

Black Hat: a simple black hat with a band to keep it on his head.

Weapons/Charms: Nintojo (The Staff of Two Heads): The staff has the head of an old man on one side and the head of a woman on the other side. The woman has long, black hair that is twisted around the staff. The staff is taller than Jaken. The old man can release fire from its mouth which makes the Nintojo a weapon. However, the Nintojo can also be used to give directions.


Attributes

Mortal/Immortal: Immortal
Blessings/Curses: None
Resurrection/Reincarnation: Jaken was resurrected by Sesshomaru with Tenseiga when he was killed by Kaijinbo.
Immunities: None
Weaknesses: Due to his height Jaken is susceptible to assault.

Abilities/Powers: Jaken is a kappa demon. The kappa is a mythical creature that lives in water. Due to this, Jaken is able to breathe underwater.


Personality

Traits: Humble, Confident (in Sesshomaru), Passive, Dependent
Habits: Talking too much, Talking to himself, praising Sesshomaru
Hobbies: Sesshomaru
Fears: Death, Abandonment (by Sesshomaru)

In-Depth Personality: Although Jaken was once a Kappa Demon Lord, Jaken is humble. Jaken is humbled by Sesshomaru who he deems to be the greatest person (including all demons, hanyou and humans) ever. Jaken wants to prove to Sesshomaru that he is useful to Sesshomaru.

Although Jaken has great confidence in Sesshomaru Jaken is afraid of death. Jaken was almost killed by another Kappa Demon Lord but was saved by Sesshomaru. Jaken was killed by Kaijinbo (but was resurrected by Sesshomaru) and due to these life-threatening experiences he is afraid of death. Jaken is also afraid of abandonment by Sesshomaru, who he fears may not recognise his potential.

Perhaps due to loneliness Jaken talks too much when spoken too. When there is no one else to talk to, Jaken talks to himself. These conversations with other people and with himself often involve praising Sesshomaru.

History

Relatives: Unknown
Figures: Sesshomaru (master / guardian / hero)
Companions: Sesshomaru, Rin, A-Un
Friends: Rin
Enemies: Inu-Yasha group, Naraku group
Mates: None

In-Depth History: Jaken was once a Kappa Demon Lord. However, Jaken was attacked by another Kappa Demon Lord. Sesshomaru came to Jaken and the opposing Kappa Demon Lord. Sesshomaru had no intention about helping Jaken, but killed the opposing Kappa Demon Lord because it was obstructing his path.

Jaken followed Sesshomaru due to a sense of obligation. Sesshomaru decided that Jaken could be his servant if he could use the Nintojo (The Staff of Two Heads). Jaken was able to use the staff and has been with Sesshomaru ever since.

Jaken assisted Sesshomaru in discovering the location of Inu no Taisho's tomb. He used the Nintojo to locate the the tomb and the Nintojo to kill anyone who opposed Sesshomaru (before, after, and during) this.

Jaken was also present when Sesshomaru resurrected Rin. Jaken is often left behind with Rin to protect her when Sesshomaru is doing something dangerous. However, Jaken is not happy about this. Jaken wants to be with Sesshomaru at all times. However, Jaken tolerates Rin and her games. Jaken later becomes friends with Rin.

Role-Play Sample: Jaken had not wanted to be left behind, but Sesshomaru did not listen to him. Jaken was alone even though Rin was with him. Rin was asleep and Jaken had only the fire Rin had lit to keep him company.

Jaken sighed, he wished that his lord Sesshomaru had not kept Rin. It would have been simple to drop her off at a human village but he insisted on keeping her. It only meant more work for him. It meant helping Rin find food and protecting Rin if a lowly demon came by. Jaken missed the time when he could have his lord Sesshomaru all to himself.

Now Jaken had to share his lord Sesshomaru with Rin. It made Jaken angry, but it also made him sad. Jaken sighed again and stirred the fire with a stick. He wished at least that Rin would wake up and keep him company.

[Rin]

I will accept your profile after you make these changes: Jaken cannot weigh that much, he is very small and more likely weighs around 40 - 50; which is a little less than Rin.

In Jaken's in-depth personality, Kaijinbo's name is missing an "n".

For Jaken's enemies, instead of putting Inu-Yasha etc, Naraku etc - you should put Inu-Yasha's Group, Naraku's Group. The term "etc" can be misleading because it would be referring to anyone/anything similar to Inu-Yasha and Naraku.

In Jaken's history, I believe you meant to put "Jaken is not happy about this." instead of "Jaken is not happy about his."

Although it is not required, I would suggest you mention somewhere in his history or personality that Jaken eventually comes to like Rin - he disliked her at first, but he does become fond of her over-time, even if he does not express it often or very well. Thank you for your contribution!

[Kikyo / Jaken]

I changed Jaken's weight. I changed "etc" to "group". I mentioned that Jaken and Rin become friends and corrected the grammar you mentioned.

[Rin]

Thank you! You are accepted.

Your profile can be found in the "Approved Canons" board.